Friday, September 23, 2016

Using a thesaurus to help students improve their choice of words

Original version:
On the first day, we met our class teacher Mr Wong, we thought he would be very strict to us. After one week, we found Mr Wong was very nice! We like this secondary school and we like to be in 1A. This is a good school and 1A is very good. The teachers in this school are very kind and nice and our classmates are also kind, friendly and nice. We like each other very much.

Revised version:
On the first day, we met our class teacher Mr Wong, we thought he would be very strict to us. After one week, we found Mr Wong was very gentle! We are happy with this secondary school and we are glad to be in 1A. This is a wonderful school and 1A is marvelous. The teachers in this school are excellent and delightful and our classmates are also helpful, friendly and great. We love each other very much.

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